Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Why sentence structure matters:



Whoaaaaa, wait, what? Let's look at this again:

JERUSALEM (Reuters) - A bulldozer driver went on a rampage in Jerusalem on Tuesday, hitting vehicles near a hotel where U.S. Democratic presidential candidate Barack Obama is due to stay later in the day before he was shot dead.

Hmm. Methinks this sentence should be rewritten.

Will they fix it before you visit this link? Gawker spotted this earlier today, and no change yet...

No comments: